tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post2397012549589179491..comments2023-07-02T03:19:33.184-07:00Comments on Caya Papaya: Haiku my heart- swimming...Deann LMFThttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01563866804067082957noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-45974435362974745782010-07-30T16:49:00.843-07:002010-07-30T16:49:00.843-07:00You've beautifully captured your daughter'...You've beautifully captured your daughter's 'awkward, fearless beauty' in both image and verse. Perfect moment.<br /><br />~Debpaper-n-soulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17003641513663962692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-56342048770454035682010-07-30T12:46:13.036-07:002010-07-30T12:46:13.036-07:00What a lovely haiku and sweet story about you and ...What a lovely haiku and sweet story about you and your daughter. I can't remember learning to swim-but I would recommend it as i is such fun-just being in the water is lovely!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15941415622199071141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-59798433181980187682010-07-30T09:14:41.145-07:002010-07-30T09:14:41.145-07:00I never learned either. How wonderful that your l...I never learned either. How wonderful that your littlest mermaid is learning. TheresaTheresa MacNaughtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16034781876024849974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-84150452927938459942010-07-30T07:35:53.866-07:002010-07-30T07:35:53.866-07:00What an incredibly beautiful mermaid picture! I l...What an incredibly beautiful mermaid picture! I love "awkward fearless beauty." Perfect!<br /><br />I never learned to swim, either, but love being near the water. I think someone has hidden my Selkie skin so that I can't return to the Ocean that I love. One day, I will locate it, though!Delphynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10024068947467297351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-2692946204316053672010-07-30T07:02:48.158-07:002010-07-30T07:02:48.158-07:00happily surfacing...I LOVE IT!! and oh Mr Magical....happily surfacing...I LOVE IT!! and oh Mr Magical...that "mermaid watery melody" haiku is wonderfuldeb did ithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11540239617159548759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-48560824978052336462010-07-30T05:48:17.944-07:002010-07-30T05:48:17.944-07:00amazing...such a gorgeous child! me too, about my ...amazing...such a gorgeous child! me too, about my son...learning and succeeding at swimming..*jean*https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325374997441856732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-29117023716756025042010-07-30T04:26:09.716-07:002010-07-30T04:26:09.716-07:00lovely...
and with your haiku so many flooding mem...lovely...<br />and with your haiku so many flooding memories from childhood. your love too floods this offering. perfect gift for your mermaid, offering a wider more adventurous world to explore.<br />yes. indeed, you too should learn to swim, perfect leap of faith! <br />thank you for being here.rebeccahttp://www.corazon.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-25118868303420363352010-07-30T04:15:32.324-07:002010-07-30T04:15:32.324-07:00This is beautiful! I often take my Grand children ...This is beautiful! I often take my Grand children swimming and they are all water kids. This is sweet.<br />The best verse isn't just in that Haiku, I like the reference in your narrative about the mermaid, a lot!<br /><br />Peace.Spadomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17781369901345409341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-26886967394687526342010-07-30T04:06:06.539-07:002010-07-30T04:06:06.539-07:00You know that's just how I felt about my child...You know that's just how I felt about my children. I could not learn to swim...But they did! Grand haiku!A Bit of the Blarneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18418671116015181693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-2686459446466299652010-07-30T03:58:21.318-07:002010-07-30T03:58:21.318-07:00Such a cute waterbaby.Such a cute waterbaby.Merihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07024443046207501650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4373826929959727898.post-44063171876963437632010-07-29T23:42:31.145-07:002010-07-29T23:42:31.145-07:00In her bones, mermaids
sing watery melodies
and sh...In her bones, mermaids<br />sing watery melodies<br />and she sings with them.<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2010/07/30/haiku-my-heart-to-the-clouds/" rel="nofollow">Haiku My Heart…to the Clouds</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.com